Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
The issue is whether or not news press and the internet have caused folk attention spans to get truncate. However, the whole effect has been positive: while folk are less able to concentrate on one particular thing, they more than make up for it with an flourish ability to sort through burden quantities of information and find what's essential. I strongly concur Mass media and the google have caused people's focus spans to get shorter, and behind this agreement, my following reasons mentioned below:
Firstly, In this modern era Internet is vital part of human-being. Because from Study to IT Co-operation is Use an internet. Therefore people less focus in particle thing. For instance, In high-school teacher give homework to student, and pupils use internet to find the answer of question and complete their homework. This thing caused student focus in education, after that they can loss their ability to find answer from text-box.
Secondly, If any problem is raise whether it is small or big problem. Peeps are start finding solution in the internet directly. They cannot try to solve the problem by themselves, So thing make them lazy and unintelligent.
On the other hand, Internet is very useful and efficient way for find any kind of information. For example, I'm in out-state, and i don't know correct rout from current location to destination. At this time internet is useful for find rout, and also find shortest distance to reach destination.
On the whole, The original statement is veracity. Mass Media and the internet have caused people's focus spans to get truncate. Because of folk are being the lazy and unintelligent.
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- Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through lar 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue is whether or not news press and the internet have caused...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ing, they more than make up for it with an flourish ability to sort through burden...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...rden quantities of information and find whats essential. I strongly concur Mass media...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... Internet is vital part of human-being. Because from Study to IT Co-operation is Use an...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... to IT Co-operation is Use an internet. Therefore people less focus in particle thing. Fo...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d any kind of information. For example, Im in out-state, and i dont know correct r...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...on. For example, Im in out-state, and i dont know correct rout from current location...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'find the shortest'.
Suggestion: find the shortest
...ernet is useful for find rout, and also find shortest distance to reach destination. On th...
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Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k are being the lazy and unintelligent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08455882353 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68640840469 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1625709436 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4375 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.21951772744 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406152841784 0.243740707755 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11354458824 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125750888969 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212679875074 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181072486146 0.0667264976115 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.