Argument: One increasingly popular policy for promoting renewable energy is a feed-in tariff. Under such a policy, investors on any scale, from large corporations to individual homeowners, produce their own energy from solar panels installed on their property. Electricity companies are then required to purchase the energy through a long-term contract at an increased rate that would allow the investors to more than offset the cost over time. There is no denying that the initial cost of solar installation would be a burden on the investor. In strenuous economic times, both businesses and homeowners might be reluctant to make the investment, with concern that the payout could be less than sufficient or the plan might prove unfeasible. However, research has shown that a feed-in tariff plan is not only stable but also exceptionally effective, and ought to be more actively pursued.
The author say feed-in traiff ploy is not only static but also exceptinally effective, and more actively for Electricity. On other hand , solar panels not work perfect in winter and monsoon season. so it is not effective and helpful for whole years. For instance, some home device or company machine need huge walts power which can not get from solar panels in monsoon or winter season.
The first assumption is that they produce their own energy from solar panels installed on their homeowners property. It is not effective ways they are put solar panels in people house. Because some folk have small house, they don't have space to put solar panels in their home.
The author second argument is that There is no denying for the installing cost of solar panels. However solar panels are costly, and investor has invest a huge amount but all people can not be rich.So lowly peeps can't but the solar panels. Company owner should try to ebb the cost or give free panels for some few months for testing purpose.
The author last premise is that for both businesses and homeowners might be reluctant to make investment. It is not sure to be reluctant the cost or not, and also not sure about planing is unfeasible or feasible, so it risky.
Company should continous with both electricity power and solar panels, they should not remove electricity power and put solar panels. Start with slowly to put solar panels in market. It is effective ways for solar panels.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: ?? Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 255 350
No. of Characters: 1178 1500
No. of Different Words: 132 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.996 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.62 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.2 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.214 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.427 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.412 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.656 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... actively for Electricity. On other hand , solar panels not work perfect in winter...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...k perfect in winter and monsoon season. so it is not effective and helpful for who...
^^
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... need huge walts power which can not get from solar panels in monsoon or winter s...
^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ective ways they are put solar panels in people house. Because some folk have sma...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ecause some folk have small house, they dont have space to put solar panels in their...
^^^^
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'invested'.
Suggestion: invested
...lar panels are costly, and investor has invest a huge amount but all people can not be...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...e amount but all people can not be rich.So lowly peeps cant but the solar panels. ...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...l people can not be rich.So lowly peeps cant but the solar panels. Company owner sho...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 55.5748502994 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 2260.96107784 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 253.0 441.139720559 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82213438735 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28716778184 2.78398813304 82% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 204.123752495 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 705.55239521 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5196692617 57.8364921388 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 119.503703932 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.70786347227 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219477159353 0.218282227539 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822030057996 0.0743258471296 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829800797637 0.0701772020484 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116598800596 0.128457276422 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768608327249 0.0628817314937 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.3799401198 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.3550499002 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 98.500998004 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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