The maps illustrate the changes made to the road access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. It is clear that there are many new infrastructure and buildings constructed around the hospital to facilitate access, but it is clear that the city hospital remained unchanged.
in 2007, the hospital road which was running from south to north had three bus stations in each side with a parking on the right side of the road used by hospital staff in addition to the public. The ring road surrounded the hospital from all sides.
In 2010, while is clear that the city hospital building did not change, there is a new public parking east to the ring road and the old parking became for staff. Instead of the six bus stops, there is a new bus station to the left of the hospital road for which two roundabouts were built to at its ends facilitate traffic movement.
- To learn a foreign language successfully you need to spend time in the country where the language is spoken Do you agree or disagree Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience 83
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 86
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...he city hospital remained unchanged. in 2007, the hospital road which was runni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55769230769 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41389353235 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2076244763 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235290111771 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137879124072 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814970199546 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171894087667 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627514107762 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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