Escalating choas of automobiles on road is fundamental cause of pollution, traffic jams and so on.To graple with this hurdle some experts opine that government should provide public transport with no charges to citizens daily. From my perspective i am totally disagree with this statement ,to support my view itend to frame some relevent points in upcoming paragraphs.
It is irrefutable fact that traffic problem is commonly seen in every corner of globe. With one mistake while driving and not following traffic rules leads to massive stuck of transport. Public transport play essential part in nation economy. If government provide public transport free then huge recession in economy as well as economy level become unbalanced because, inhabitants buy tickets including all taxes which is a result of providing money for authority expenditures such as medical care, education etcetera. Moreover, business of personal vehicles totally flowed. This means that some automobile companies who made private vehicles provide employment to many humans, if all dwellers use free government transport either there is no demand of private transport or huge rush will also seen in buses and trains.
There are another factors to sort out this problem rather than provide free travelling in government vehicles. Firstly, car pooling is a marvellous method. For instance, if two or more person want to go at same destination then tgey can share car, this method not only convenient but also cost effective. Secondly, provide daily passes, monthly passes on less charges attrect the travellers toward using public transport. Last but not the least, some policies related to control traffic, for example, odd even policy in Delhi is a great way to deal with vehicle choas.
To conclude, providing availability of public transport with no cost is not a right way because it have great impact on nation's economy. There are some another methods which are neither expensive nor sophisticated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34504792332 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69454300662 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651757188498 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.994574947 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200677649544 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632525090638 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429354888584 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118030354305 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381641637905 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.