Reading talks about many critics wants ethanol fuel which derived from plants should be not replaced by gasoline for several reasons. The lecturer, on the other hand casts doubts on all claims made in the article.
First of all, writer states that ethanol fuel would not help to maintain atmosphere heat while burned. Because it will release carbon dioxide which has play important role in global climate. Thus, ethanol will not help to solve environmental problems. However, the professor refuse well due to production of carbon dioxide the temperature of atmosphere would be interrupted. He argues, as article mentions by burning ethanol fuel the greenhouse gas will spread into environment is right but, plants such as corn will absorb all greenhouse gas. So, the atmosphere heat will remain constant.
Second, reading suggests that ethanol fuel will eliminate available plants for uses of other fuel. For example, corn plants which is present in America is best source to feed farm animal such as cows and chicken. On contrary, the lecture claims that source for food will be disappear for mammals. Furthermore, he argues that cellulose which are found in many plants will appeared while ethanol fuel burned is the best source for animal feeding.
Finally, article suggests that although price of ethanol fuel and gasoline are same in the United stated which cost the government 11$ billion since 30 years. If government stop helping to ethanol producer no more price will be compete. However, the professor says it is meaningful that government control the price of ethanol, if the population increased the price of ethanol fuel will remain same. He puts forth, if the production get three time greater and people develop the interests regarding consumption of ethanol fuel, the price will trap suddenly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... maintain atmosphere heat while burned. Because it will release carbon dioxide which ha...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'appear'
Suggestion: appear
...ose which are found in many plants will appeared while ethanol fuel burned is the best s...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$11'.
Suggestion: $11
...United stated which cost the government 11$ billion since 30 years. If government s...
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... government 11$ billion since 30 years. If government stop helping to ethanol prod...
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Line 4, column 558, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nol fuel, the price will trap suddenly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 293.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19453924915 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46947608871 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556313993174 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7598807433 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.542344082047 0.272083759551 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181664371292 0.0996497079465 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976791886032 0.0662205650399 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312768425874 0.162205337803 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674884504693 0.0443174109184 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.