Technology is became a important component of our daily life, or rather dominates it. Nowadays even little kids are attracted by this technology, and surely has an direct impact on his personality. And I will expand in explanation in the following essay.
First, technology is existing around kids and they are exposed to it every day, television, phone, and video games are the more attractive in my opinion.
Television is the preferred companion of kids, they can spend hours watching it. And the impact depend in my opinion on what they watching exactly, it is a sword with two edges, if they watch a good and educational shows it may be beneficial and will help them in their school. And as a compelling example my little daughter like wach abc’s shows that teache alphabet and now in age of two she knows already the alphabet, thus is a good result.
In other hand if they exaggerate watching tv without parental control it may harm them and has a negative impact on their study and behavior as well.
Secondly, phones now are wildly used and even kids in early ages can possess one, the most issues in my opinion is that phones can be a easiest way for som mean adult to abuse children hence, i think that kids are not allowed to have phones until they attend a acceptable level of conscience.
Scientists aprouve that video games specially those with violence concepts, impact kids personality negatively and make kids who tend to violence and make crimes when they grow up.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that technology may help kids to be more creative or the contrast it depend on what they exposed to and parental control.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cted by this technology, and surely has an direct impact on his personality. And I...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ues in my opinion is that phones can be a easiest way for som mean adult to abuse...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ues in my opinion is that phones can be a easiest way for som mean adult to abuse...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79442508711 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58176162455 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5910246252 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943914554459 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372993780515 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0190320654588 0.0737576698707 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457653101415 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154605267239 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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