You are living in an apartment and you are happy, write a letter to your landlord and tell him about the improvement you want in this apartment.
1. Why are you happy in this apartment?
2. What type of improvement you want?
3. How it will change the apartment?
Dear Sir,
My name is Shruti. I am your tenant staying in your apartment number 813 in jollyville. I am writing this letter with regards to the improvements that has to be done to the apartment.
Firstly, I would like to express my happiness regarding your apartment. My family loves the apartment, it’s so nice and cozy with proper light and air ventilation in all the rooms and the best part about the apartment, is the spacious rooms and beautiful lake view from the terrace.
Secondly, I would like to suggest some improvements to the apartment which is necessary and will add a value to the apartment in near future. In the kitchen, water purifier is a must because no one would like to fall ill drinking un-purified water and next one is about the bright and flashy wall colors in all the rooms, the wall colors should be light and peaceful colors so that is should be appealing to you to stay in a room not to run away from the room.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Shruti.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...ld be light and peaceful colors so that is should be appealing to you to stay in a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62295081967 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56472253201 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8983248796 44.8134815571 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218368629045 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899282227043 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602156182111 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134187246852 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459952599324 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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