Nowadays access to information becomes too easy thanks to internet, if used accurately it can be an incredible and valuable source of information, I feel this way for two mean reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, internet is the most tools of research used now since people are looking for an all on one, otherwise in internet you can found a different references for one information wich is a good think for students Because they are asked all the time to make essays and presentations.
When I was student i always enjoyed this wealth of information to prepare my assignments rather than books and magazines because I wanted samthing that easy to use and practical.
Secondly, internet is a fastest way to spread information, especially in social media, and electronic magazines, yesterday a train crash happend in the city, the tv diffused the news but I did found the details in web with a real and direct interrogations in crash scene.
Otherwise internet is not always a trusted source of information sometimes we can found a misleading websites that their first interest is get the most viewers, beside that yellow website that trade of scandals of famous personalities.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that internet is a precious source of information if it used accurately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'reference'?
Suggestion: reference
...e in internet you can found a different references for one information wich is a good thin...
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Line 6, column 23, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...and practical. Secondly, internet is a fastest way to spread information, espe...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...ect interrogations in crash scene. Otherwise internet is not always a trusted source...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...ion sometimes we can found a misleading websites that their first interest is get the mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02262443439 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98865267277 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606334841629 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8570729935 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.0 100.406767564 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8333333333 20.6045352989 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 5.45110844103 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162608686452 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746176245872 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339751097315 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746176245872 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339751097315 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 11.7677419355 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 58.1214874552 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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