One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the young people leaving home at an early age. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in society. In my opinion, leaving home at an early age has more disadvantages than advantages in society.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefits of leaving home at an early age is it makes young people more independent. For example, young people, unlike in the past, now have more opportunity to work in multicultural environments, as before they used to work within their own community, thanks to globalisation.
On the other hand, there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. One of the most preponderant ones is that leaving home either for study or work has negative consequences for society in various ways. Firstly, a person leaving alone far away in from parents may get into depression, such as in metro cities where people dont have time to chat with each other. According to "Times Magazine December 2017 edition", the proportion of young people suffering from depression has increased from 10 per cent to 30 per cent today. Secondly, a large portion of the brain drain problem occurs in society, because of young talented people migrating to other cities.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of India is taking great initiatives in educating its nationals against the negative impact of migrating to other cities either for work or study. Young people are being encouraged to work or study in their own cities, to compensate for getting their cities from big problems like the brain drain.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some benefits, the drawbacks of young people leaving home at an early age in the society are indeed too dire to ignore.+
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- Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace, so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another.To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 31.9359605911 200% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 323.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86377708978 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70125214009 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8084356108 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388254480238 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135552510016 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806550186272 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222714917682 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447704205513 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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