The statistical pie charts illustrates information about the proportion of water utilisation im major three areas-industrial, agriculture and domestic work in six continents of the world.
The main striking feature of the chart is that largest accountable share of water is used for agriculture in four areas South America, Africa, Central Asia.However, in North America and Europe vast amount of water goes for domestic purpose.
It can be clearly seen that North America and Europe use almost half percentage of water in domestic sector and approximately one-third percentage of water utilised in area. However, major amount of water used for agriculture in South America with 71% and least by industries accounted as 10%. Former continent consume only 15% for domestic and latter continent 10% for industrial.
Moving further, consumption of water in Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia in agricultural sector is 84%, 88% and 81% respectively. The difference of 5% is observed in utilisation of water in South East Asia for industrial and domestic whereas almost similar rate of utilised water for both sectors vivid in Central Asia. The percentile of consumed water in continent Africa is 9% for domestic and 7% for industrial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35714285714 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02442163023 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4189677654 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222071622844 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112882972641 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532514312937 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158662627093 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316066920785 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.4329268293 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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