Your brother couldn't join you on a trip that you guys planned. Write a letter to your friend inviting him to join.
- explain about the trip.
- explain why your brother couldn't make it.
- giving details about the trip.
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health. Well, I am writing to invite you to fortnight excursion to Maldives Islands to accompany me.
To begin with the details of the trip, our trip will commence from December 25 and end on January 7. Isn't it amazing? Since It will be a midwinter so you can easily take workday off. Firstly, we will explore south area where there are plenty of secluded beaches and one of them is 'Quixotic Cocoa Island Beach', which has breathtaking scenery. We can go there and relax while taking sunbath. Apart from that, there are some local markets to explore especially during christmas and new year eve. There will be lively and vibrant places at that time, which you will like definitely. Later, in second week we can plan to party at villa which is in a vicinity of many beaches. We can also dine in at one of the luxurious restaurants during that week and lastly to add more fun, we can visit casino in north area.
Unfortunately, we will be only two. Earlier my brother has also planned to join us but now his wife's delivery date is approaching. So, he couldn't make it. May be next time he would join us.
Moreover, I am enclosing few pictures of beaches and villa where we will be staying. Please have a look once.
I hope you would like an idea of this trip. Please write to me soon so that we can book our itinerary in advance.
Love,
Ell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
... from December 25 and end on January 7. Isnt it amazing? Since It will be a midwinte...
^^^^
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...es delivery date is approaching. So, he couldnt make it. May be next time he would join...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...pproaching. So, he couldnt make it. May be next time he would join us. Moreover...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 4.92783505155 325% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43461538462 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31041826178 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0223974148 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6842105263 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6842105263 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117810703026 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362953751996 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447313767856 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733248643246 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420552531427 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.