Since from the past friends are the very essential creature in every person's life. Different people have distinct perception in admitting the importance between old friends and new ones. Some people might love making new friends as different people have different uniqueness whereas some might find influential with the old friends. I agree with the latter one with the facts that the old friends share a good bond of understanding with the loyal, trustworthy and honest relationship.
First of all, friends are an integral part of any person's life and add happiness in life. It also has a saying " Friends in need is a friend indeed". It is easier to share the feelings and secrets with old friends than to new friends. For example, When i walk with my old friends we tend to criticize the people around us in a humorous way which adds joy and fun in daily life. But its not comfortable to share such silly things with the new friends as we don't know their taste of humor.
Secondly, old friends are always there when we need them. They are like our family members with whom we don't feel shame in asking help or demanding certain things. For example, when I want to visit any new places than i just had to make a call and they are ready without questioning why i want to go there. They are so easy to communicate with. Moreover, such camaraderie relation is not common among the new friends.
Finally, aged friends are more than a teacher in giving an advice. As they are friends for so long, there is a trustworthy relation among them. For an instance, I had made a mistake in my project. When they realize about it they instantly correct me and saves my grade from degrading. When i do good things they applaud me and it gives me motivation to do more innovative things which is obviously lacking in new pals.
In conclusion, I share a healthy bond with old friends as they are supportive, genuine and factual people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since from the past friends are the very esse...
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Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...re the very essential creature in every persons life. Different people have distinct pe...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ll, friends are an integral part of any persons life and add happiness in life. It also...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... than to new friends. For example, When i walk with my old friends we tend to cri...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...ith my old friends we tend to criticize the people around us in a humorous way which adds joy and fu...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a humorous way" with adverb for "humorous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... tend to criticize the people around us in a humorous way which adds joy and fun in daily life. B...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...silly things with the new friends as we dont know their taste of humor. Secondly...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re like our family members with whom we dont feel shame in asking help or demanding ...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... they are ready without questioning why i want to go there. They are so easy to c...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...iends are more than a teacher in giving an advice. As they are friends for so long, there...
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Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and saves my grade from degrading. When i do good things they applaud me and it g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63188405797 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52851995217 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513043478261 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7341946594 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212939895038 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711934231475 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499122094127 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122156128425 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039596653677 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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