"A recent study of Dura-Socks customers suggests that our company is wasting the money it spends on its patented Endure manufacturing process, which ensures that our socks are strong enough to last for two years. We have always advertised our use of the Endure process, but the new study shows that despite the socks' durability, our customers, on average, actually purchase new Dura-Socks every three months. Furthermore, customers surveyed in our largest market— northeastern United States cities—say that they most value Dura- Socks' stylish appearance and availability in many colors. These findings suggest that we can increase our profits by discontinuing use of the Endure manufacturing process."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
In recent study, shows that the Dura Socks company ensures durability of the products but their customers , on average purchase new Dura Socks every three months . From another survey of customers from Northeastern United States cities , as they most value Dura socks stylish appearance and many color, author suggests an assumptions by discontinuing the use of Endure manufacturing process, the profit can be increased .here, the claimed assumption is dubious because it has not claimed any proof of that suggested assumptions .
Dura socks company spends money on its patented endure manufacturing process to ensure that their socks are strong enough to last for two years. Their socks have longevity but the study claimed that their customers on average , purchase new Dura Socks every three months. There might be likely that the customers who purchase every three months the products for their personal motives. As example average customers are sports person, mother. For sports person , they always maintain to keep extra socks and mother of new born babies, school children ,always buy more socks for their kids.
Another survey it is shown that, customers from Northeastern United States, value Dura socks stylish appearance and availability of many colors. From these surveyed author suggest that the profit can be increased by discontinuing use of the Endure manufacturing process. But these suggested solution have no proof .There is no reliable data since . There can be made a survey for the customers who will ensure the companies profit by discontinuing the use of manufacturing process . If it happens then the claimed suggestion can be accepted.
The claimed suggestion needs to have reliable data to accept .without any proof the company should not go with the suggestion .
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- not exactly
argument 2 -- not OK
argument 3 -- ???
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minimum 3 arguments wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1469 1500
No. of Different Words: 136 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.209 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.606 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.985 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.308 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.391 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.582 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In recent study, shows that the Dura Socks company ensures durabili...
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Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In recent study, shows that the Dura Socks company ensures durability of...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lity of the products but their customers , on average purchase new Dura Socks ever...
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Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rchase new Dura Socks every three months . From another survey of customers from N...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s from Northeastern United States cities , as they most value Dura socks stylish a...
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Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun color seems to be countable; consider using: 'many colors'.
Suggestion: many colors
...value Dura socks stylish appearance and many color, author suggests an assumptions by dis...
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Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pearance and many color, author suggests an assumptions by discontinuing the use ...
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Line 1, column 423, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ing process, the profit can be increased .here, the claimed assumption is dubious ...
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Line 1, column 531, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... any proof of that suggested assumptions . Dura socks company spends money on its...
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Line 2, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... claimed that their customers on average , purchase new Dura Socks every three mon...
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Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sports person, mother. For sports person , they always maintain to keep extra sock...
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Line 2, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they always maintain to keep extra socks and mother of new born babies, school ch...
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Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ther of new born babies, school children ,always buy more socks for their kids. A...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lity of many colors. From these surveyed author suggest that the profit can be in...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...an be increased by discontinuing use of the Endure manufacturing process. But these sugges...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t these suggested solution have no proof .There is no reliable data since . There ...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...these suggested solution have no proof .There is no reliable data since . There can b...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o proof .There is no reliable data since . There can be made a survey for the cust...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tinuing the use of manufacturing process . If it happens then the claimed suggesti...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uing the use of manufacturing process . If it happens then the claimed suggestion ...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...on needs to have reliable data to accept .without any proof the company should not...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ompany should not go with the suggestion .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 55.5748502994 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 2260.96107784 67% => OK
No of words: 282.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34042553191 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69570489995 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 204.123752495 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492907801418 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 705.55239521 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8616169708 57.8364921388 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 5.70786347227 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.25449101796 419% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3424023558 0.218282227539 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137763317724 0.0743258471296 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129083729525 0.0701772020484 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198218585433 0.128457276422 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854037585012 0.0628817314937 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.5979740519 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.9071856287 151% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.