Many university students live with their families while others need to live to live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations.
In the modern and challenging society, acquisition of knowledge can help to survive and achieve success in the life. During the studies, some pupils prefer to live in their families in order to receive comfort, while their is another group of students, who like to live in hostels of their respective universities for their personal development. Both stays have their own advantages and disadvantages which are discussed in the following paragraphs.
Indeed, their are enormous advantages living with families during the initial period of graduation. Undoubtedly, raging is curse to our society and it is still happening in the universities. At such harsh time, every pupil need an emotional support which can be provided by their parents. Furthermore, comfort zone of home can never be found at anywhere else. However, it should not be denied that the adolescents cannot enjoy their college lives as they have to come back to their homes after their classes.
In the hostels, teenagers are independent and they have to handle all their responsibility by their own. This help them to build a stronger character which help them throughout their lives. Furthermore, studies can be done much better in the hostels as roommates can provide support in the assignments and during exam period, eventually grades get betters. Despite such advantages, homesickness and raging are common which can break students emotionally. Eventheless, the quality of food in hostels is not adequate and lead to sickness.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, both the options, hostel stay and home stays have their own pros and cons. It should be left on teenagers to choose and parents should support them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23616236162 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80749007432 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9731020674 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284832818183 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880810270294 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10319924223 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176039766166 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110682863592 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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