Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?

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Few people considers pet animals as a so...
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...ers pet animals as a source of advantage for them ,they mostly ignore the needs o...
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...imals as a source of advantage for them ,they mostly ignore the needs of pets .Th...
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...ets should not be allowed to keep them nowadays pets are turning out as a symbo...
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...ts are turning out as a symbol of status,as the world advances and family bonds bec...
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...sion of animals as pets to modern family .People considering animals as their best...
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...imals as their best friends and security .Recent years witnessed a change in the a...
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... home to inside home and even to bedroom .People finding entertainment and time pa...
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...ainment and time pass with the animals Though some of the owners shows responsi...
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...hem are deprived of efficient treatment.Even though they are animals they have a hab...
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...als they have a habitat and social needs ,most of the time they are put in cage .F...
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...s ,most of the time they are put in cage .Few of them are subjected to serious iss...
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...s issues such as lack of nutritious food ,shelters and safe environment which prot...
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...tly old ones are undergone such problems .So this is highly recommended that one w...
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...this is highly recommended that one who cant take care of pets should not be allowed...
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... pets should not be allowed to grew them ,there should be such a strong law encomp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81603773585 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66553678077 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570754716981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 212.0 20.2975951904 1044% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1021.0 106.682146367 957% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 212.0 20.7667163134 1021% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305386694836 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.305386694836 0.084324248473 362% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219123274373 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906109287295 0.056905535591 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 107.3 13.0946893788 819% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -135.24 50.2224549098 -269% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 84.8 11.3001002004 750% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.16 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.28 8.58950901804 201% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 86.8 10.1190380762 858% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 87.0 10.7795591182 807% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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