Infrastructure of motorways among countries increase every year. As a result people can travel faster and more efficient. However, driving on motorways follows with many problems, such as fatal car accidents and increasing level of pollutions due to high speed. Although, there are number of measures that can be implemented to tackle these problems.
History of motorways began during The Second World War II when the first motorway had been built to cut traveling time from weapon factories to a battlefield. However, nowadays, motorways are not only used for industrial purposes, but also by commuters or travellers. In many countries increasing demand of it led to pushing speed boundaries way further than before. Undoubtedly high speed is the biggest killer on motorway, many drivers have been killed or seriously injured while driving fast. Take Germany for example. In vast percentage, motorways in Germany are without a speed limit and as a result of this the most drivers have found dead there. To tackle this linger phenomenon, speed limit should be set and strictly controlled by Police as well as sophisticated features such as speeding cameras or cameras monitoring level of tiredness might be installed; and offenders highly fined.
Moreover, areas around motorways are highly polluted. It is a basic physic, as faster car is moving as more fossil fuel is burned and as a result of this more pollutions is emitted into the air. Motorways had been found after industrial areas and large cities as place with the highest proportion of emissions. To reduce this negative consequences of modern travelling is reducing speed and plant more trees among the motorways. In many cities, speed on freeways had been significantly reduced owning to pollution. Furthermore, plant more trees and greens along the motorway is the cheapest way how to clear far polluted air. Trees owning to photosynthesis can clear contaminated air and noticeably reduce proportion of pollutions.
In short, only when speed is reduced and offenders are highly punished as well as more trees are plant along the motorways, will less drivers been killed and eco-system will improve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... level of pollutions due to high speed. Although, there are number of measures that can ...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun drivers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ees are plant along the motorways, will less drivers been killed and eco-system will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, for example, in short, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26224783862 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81669293754 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547550432277 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0316147041 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1052631579 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134335164491 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487139103297 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435547331545 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828254006002 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055267795402 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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