The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
It is hotly debatable issue today relates to that in modern era governments more public taxes to spend on healthy lifestyle rather than medical surgery or painkiller. In this essay ,I am going to examine this question from both point of view.
On the one hand ,there are numerous stunning benefits if authority more focus to reduce health nuisance. These include enchanced establish to the yoga centre ,gardens and gym. Firstly ,now people do not like excercise in daily routine. They believe that it's just waste of time for this reason they overlook the common aliments such as overweight or obesity ,stress ,blood pressure , headache and so on. Moreover ,if authority or private health organisation open to free cost yoga centre ,gardens or parks and gym then, they more encourage to do excercise in daily routine ,with always their body fit and fine shape. For instance ,in a global there are number of nations but ,one of the country in India in annual year more people die due to the major diseases like cancer and blood transplantation.
On the other hand ,there are couple of drawbacks of treatment and medicine. Secondly ,in golden era 60 percent of youngster and elder population depends on medicine and other surgery it is very cost effective issue for society. Additionally ,there are number of diseases as cancer ,HIV OR AIDS ,kidney damage no treatment available and more expensive surgery in this world. However ,if government ranging from starting concentrate on healthy lifestyle then ,no need money to spend on any surgery and buy to medicine.
In concluded ,it can be seen that whereas the healthy lifestyle has brought some advantages in terms of safe money ,fit and fine body and more strong personality ,it's disadvantages if individual more eat the painkiller as well as kidney fail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98344370861 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58655773361 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632450331126 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.461058357 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1486959407 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051010868945 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307324833111 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08402575572 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267149403313 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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