Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans

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throughout history, human beings has prepetually c...
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...hey can reach prosperes in their lives. they have experienced a large number of situ...
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...s in their lives. they have experienced a large number of situations such as studing hard and mak...
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...ard and making relationship with other. some people may hold the view that not only ...
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...n their education to reach their goals. i, nonetheless, contend that the more inc...
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...he more person get chancess to success. in the following paragraphs, I delve into ...
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...ishing strong relationships with other. every single person has own exprience in faci...
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...on as possible and saving their time in a excellent time. in other words, every o...
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... saving their time in a excellent time. in other words, every one have limited tim...
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... to life and it is better for he or she utilize from other experiences since running in...
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...experiences since running into problem. for example, last year i started my own bus...
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...ng into problem. for example, last year i started my own business and face with q...
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...with quiet a few problems including how i can manage my company, how i can employ...
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...luding how i can manage my company, how i can employ workers and so on. i adress ...
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...ienced such situation few years ago. another reason that it is worthwhile to mention...
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...viduals to have a peace in their lives. one of the most important aspects of succes...
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...aving a life without stress and strain. this ability teach people how they can coabo...
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...ate with each other and do teamworking. since people learn how they can intensify the...
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...can intensify these skills in themselves , they are able to have calm and relaxing...
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...re able to have calm and relaxing life. humanbeings whether want or not relating with other...
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...ant or not relating with other peoples. for example, i have experienced to do schol...
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...scholls project in form a team working. at the early stage , i didnot become famil...
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... form a team working. at the early stage , i didnot become familliar with teamwork...
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...milliar with teamworking and coaboration , it was caused to my groups could not pr...
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...ps could not progress in its work after i could adjust myself with coworkers , we...
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...ter i could adjust myself with coworkers , we could progress swifter than past. ...
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...we could progress swifter than past. to sum up, as above mentioned, i believe t...
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...past. to sum up, as above mentioned, i believe that making good relationship i...
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... is more beneficial that studying hard. this is becuase of people not only learn how...
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...s such as team working and coaboration. i think since individuals can establish s...
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...s such as team working and coaboration. i think since individuals can establish s...
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...e individuals can establish strong bonds , they are able to more prosperess withou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nonetheless, so, while, for example, i think, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03464203233 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71512547419 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54272517321 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9309584442 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.80952381 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.619047619 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.5376344086 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143229580922 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487834361851 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02678233412 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943876846501 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263333018451 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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