Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

We are living in a very competitive world, where everything changes very quickly. In order to survive in this environment some people believes that hard-work is an important feature to attain their goals in person and social life. Personally, I believe that having a successful relation with others is the most important feature to being success. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with, skill of contact well means better teamwork. People who develop a respectful relationship during their work, might develop their assignments with higher quality. An example of mine might illustrate that. I used to work in an oil company and my team was requested to solve a problem in gas pipe. My group was composed by professionals from different areas that I have never worked before once we had the mindset that we should solve the problem, we develop a harmony atmosphere and we found the solution for this. As a result, our boss got so proud of our work that he congratulated us in front of the whole company.

Secondly, the ability to relate well with others might help people to find a job. When you have a good communication you can express your abilities properly and convince the interviewer that you are the right person to fill the job opportunity. As a personal experience, when I was 18 I was selected for my first job interview. My big problem was that I was too shy to talk to people. My best friend, who was more outgoing, was also participating in the selection process. As a result, she was more relaxed on expressing her ideas and she hired for the job and I did not. I would have avoided it if I had showed my best.

To sum it up, as aforementioned, to establish a good relation with different persons is a good way to success. Not only because it might offer good results when you are request to find a solution for a problem but it also might be helpful to show you qualities on work opportunity.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em in gas pipe. My group was composed by professionals from different areas that ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, i feel, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61473087819 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73722418069 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0637287161 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7368421053 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191188442629 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597927055528 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556211613176 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111346745241 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349763080704 0.0645574589148 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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