cars and Aeroplanes have become a significant part of modern life. what is your opinion?
The important effect of Cars and Aeroplanes have become a significant part of modern life, which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial. The sustainable influence of cars and aero planes and other vehicles are necessary part of our life has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent years. This essay will elaborate how transportation vehicles become life easy and people easily travel one place to another and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons all individual want to spend the easy life and they use the good transportation facilities like cars, aeroplanes and facilities, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that people easily move to one country to another country by air transportation . Furthermore, some people very busy in their life for this reason most of business and others use to fast speed vehicles
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Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of cars and aero planes play significant role in our daily life, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that due to fast speed vehicles occur a lot of accident, whereas, increase the mortality rate .Moreover, these types of transportations emits more pollution due to occur many diseases such as lungs disease ,skin problems.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of high speed vehicles are prominent, although all International government should be overlooked make a sentence about transportation vehicles and some problems occur due to vehicle’s fules should be handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27651515152 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96468796885 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.263447079 50.4703680194 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.0 104.977214359 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.7142857143 20.9669160288 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.25397266985 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213010461002 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115455233938 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139053797284 0.071462118173 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118858640027 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121933099407 0.0609392437508 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 12.6369458128 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 53.1260098522 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.