Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is the case? What can be done to attract local people?
It seems to be an widespread phenomenon that museums and historical sites are more appealing to tourists rather than residents. I think that familiarity of locals and monotonous atmosphere are responsible for this.
One essential reason for this phenomenon is that the local are born there and already familiar with their culture and history so that in their opinions, there is no need for them to pay for a visit to a place that they have already known. However, for visitors, visiting museums and historical sites is an effective means to know the rich history and culture of a nation.
Another important factor contributing to low attendance rate of local inhabitants is that the layout of museums remains unchangeable for many years, which is visually unattractive to the local. On the contrary, this would not bore the holidaymakers that much because everything is fresh to them and they are eager to acquire knowledge related to that region.
In order to deal with this phenomenon, I think that government can shoulder it role to encourage the museums to provide special offer, discount or even free entrance to local people to promote attendance rate. More importantly, the museums can hold regular exhibitions or special events to provide new experience for visitors. Last but not least, everyone should improve awareness of to appreciate their region’s heritage.
In sum, several factors lead to the low attendance rate of the local in museums and historical sites. We could take effective steps, including reducing entrance fee, organizing special events, and enhancing self-awareness to tackle this modern-day problem.
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...us atmosphere are responsible for this. One essential reason for this phenomenon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, i think, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31800766284 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90251064564 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9140237012 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232975911135 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891549447251 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662089026731 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130715609474 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394191308759 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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