The 21st century is also known as an era of inventions, there has been tremendous innovations and inventions in the area of information technology, transportations, medical science and many more. Proponents are debating over advantages and disadvantages of this inventions, many have labeled these developments to the advantage of mankind in terms of convenience and ease, others have opposite view stating that these inventions have several detrimental influences on society in terms of issues pertaining to laziness and obesity. In this article, I will discuss both positive and ill effects of such inventions along with paramount impacts of recent inventions.
To begin with, there are enormous benefits of inventions, first, they provide more comfort to the people at large, For instance, due to mammoth inventions in the fields of air transportations, people are able to explore the world and global economy was able to grow at significant space, Moreover, due to invention of computers people both at personal and professional level are able to take various advantages like doing complex financial calculations and managing huge inventories in just single click. On the other hand, there are severe negative influences of such inventions which have made people lazy and obese.
Recent development in the field of information technology has opened new avenues of digital transformations and eruptions. For example, research in the area of artificial intelligence and machine learnings. Robots are doing repetitive mundane tasks at optimum quality and cost-effectively. This has led to unemployment issues which are not good for the economy and society as a whole.
In conclusion, from the above example it is evident that there are both pros and cons of recent inventions, if used with justification and cares it can be boon, otherwise, it can turn to ban for mankind.
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- Lifestyle affects health, how should health/ medical department responds? 80
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- In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinions and give examples. 61
- Lifestyle affects health, how should health/ medical department responds? 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40476190476 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16338416864 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.738844177 50.4703680194 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.9 104.977214359 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.9669160288 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113309099412 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427143807426 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294033128222 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653230735968 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298503111906 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 12.6369458128 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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