Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study in group. Which do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers
Speaking of preference on studying, each student has their own opinion. As a college student majoring
in material science, I strongly prefer to study alone. Followings are the reasons that I supported.
Firstly, I am a person who like a quiet atmosphere and studying alone can reduce noise.
While studying alone, I enjoy an individual space and personal time. I can be more concentrate on my
school project or homework. However,any chatting or discussion in group might break my thought.
One time, I was computing a difficult engineering problem and a person in group suddenly started to laugh loudly.
Thus, My thought was interrupted by this unpleasant action.
Secondly, I emphasize on the spirit of thinking independently and studying alone can protect personal idea from being affected.
I like to figure out the problem by my own method. Solving a tough project individually can improve ability of engineering. However,
I might get many suggestions and hints from others if I study in a group. These supports might reduce the chance of self-challenging.
Last but not the least, I dedicate in time management and studying in group is not efficiency at all.
I like the schedule to follow as my own plan. It is annoying that I have to wait for others.
I have joined a group for studying chemistry. The group members spent a long time deciding the topic. Moreover, it consumed much
effort to choose a time that everyone was available. Thus, I suggest that studying alone can manage my schedule better.
Above all, studying alone can create a quiet environment and provide a chance for thinking independently. Besides, I can have better time management
if I study alone. That is why studying alone is my preference in my college life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05479452055 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94373171155 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0787731141 48.9658058833 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1666666667 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.53405017921 353% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23421154487 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692417800803 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718815472336 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874672330781 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856499308792 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.