On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything you lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
- describe the item you lost;
- explain how you lost it;
- tell the insurance company what would you like them to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about an urgent matter which occured during my holiday last week. I have lost a neckless that was supose to be an annivesary present for my wife. This object is covered in silver, have a small diamond on the bottom centre and other jewels around him.
Let me explain you in details what happened. The neckless was bought in an auction for five thousand dollars and I have the receipt to prove it which I am sending to you. It was in the Saint Angelo's day, a very famous holiday in Brazil, a country that I am spending my brief vacation. When I went back to the hotel, after I prepared my suitcase, I decided to relax in the bar. However, surprisingly, the taxi came in faster that I expected and went drove me straight to the airport. I noticed my the neckless wasn't in my possesion two days later, after I organized my handbag from my trip.
So, I wonder if the insurance company could heko retrieve the neckless or refund the amount of money I had spent in the gift, since I bought it with the company's card. Besides, both of my requests are legal because I was in an international trip and used the card to make the purchase.
I look forward to hearing from you with the next step of the process.
Yours faithfuly,
Rafael
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... the airport. I noticed my the neckless wasnt in my possesion two days later, after I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40167364017 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40319663634 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606694560669 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8810319591 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9230769231 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153625015414 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563848464512 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529618589101 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911283587486 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490561068292 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.