You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left come important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
1. Say where you think you left the papers
2. Explain why they are so important
3. tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
The reason I am writing the letter is to inform you about some documents that I had forgotten while I was in the hotel this morning. Since they are critical for me I need them before the week ends in order to complete a transaction. So can you help me retrive them back?
To begin with, early today, I met with an investor inside the hotel in one fo your conference rooms; I believe it was the place accross the main hall next to the fire escape with a silver door knob. Once you find the spot, the papers I am looking for are in a brown folder and they contain a guide and instructions about bank accounts,dates, values, deposits, withdrawals and a report of a trust fund located outside the county. This information is vital to send money to this institution and without her I will not be able to to my job because I can't remember some details and procedures.
Therefore, if you find these papers take them to the reception, keep it there and give me a call in the number 123456789, unless you be able to send someone bring them to me until wednesday. I hope hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Mr. Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , dates
...ide and instructions about bank accounts,dates, values, deposits, withdrawals and a re...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 525, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...tion and without her I will not be able to to my job because I cant remember some det...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...will not be able to to my job because I cant remember some details and procedures. ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'brings'.
Suggestion: brings
...789, unless you be able to send someone bring them to me until wednesday. I hope hear...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41395348837 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54892208312 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8126850103 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.444444444 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241248222246 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971178837662 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709702479373 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170097421036 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553404615641 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.