You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
- explain why you want to take some time off work;
- give details of the amount of time you need;
- suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
Dear Mr. Jackson,
I am writing to ask about the possibility of my absence from the company between August 1st and August 22nd. My request is because my wife is going to enter into the hospital due to labor and give birth to our firt son.
Let me explain the situation in more details. In advance, I appologize for this solicitation in such a important period, since we will be in the middle of a workshop which will develop our skills so as the other staff members, but I wouldn't ask you if it wasn't necesseray.
So, as the period needed, by law I have one week off from work to support my wife, although, this seems to be not enough. Along with this week away, I will ask for another two weeks of absence in order to assist my wife and newborn son with anything they need after they be release from the hospital and get back at home. Thus, this extra time off will be used from my vacation days.
At last, might I suggest somene to absob my tasks while I'm at home? I already talked to Barbara and Gustavo regarding this matter and they can help covering my work. Besides, I know they will be more than qualifed and I trust them with my tasks. Plus, in cases of emergencies, I told them that they are allowed to call me if they necessitate my help with a client or an unfamiliar job.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rafael
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ppologize for this solicitation in such a important period, since we will be in t...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ls so as the other staff members, but I wouldnt ask you if it wasnt necesseray. So,...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ff members, but I wouldnt ask you if it wasnt necesseray. So, as the period neede...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... suggest somene to absob my tasks while Im at home? I already talked to Barbara an...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to cover' or 'cover'.
Suggestion: to cover; cover
...regarding this matter and they can help covering my work. Besides, I know they will be m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, regarding, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34765625 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28997888547 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3603375083 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6153846154 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134505314541 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530037956643 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041859720197 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733131647879 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358905041486 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.