Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this fast pace world, where people are encircled with their busy routines and ambitions; movies are one big source of entertainment. There are two dimensions to this topic, to be clearer; two school of thoughts. One group of people asserts that there is no point wasting time in going to cinema and watch movie which can now be seen over mobile phones. Whereas, other group is of the opinion that movies can be fully enjoyed only when its watched on a big screen. In my opinion, there is no comparison of the pleasant experince we get when we watch a movie in cinema. If one can afford, cinema is the right place for watching movies. We shall discussion both views in detail in the following paragraphs.
There is no denial that with the help of technology world has become a global village; every type of content is available over internet. Nowadays, time is the most considerable factor and watching movies over screen does saves time, yet enjoyable. Another advantage is that it prevents us to get into the hassle of traveling to the cinema, spend extra money over tickets and food. Everything is now a click away and can be seen over small screen by sitting at home conveniently.
On the contrary, we cannot imagine creating cinematic atmosphere at home. The surround sound systems, big screen and lights that enhance the cinematography work; it’s altogether a different experience. To elucidate it further, watching movies over phones encourage piracy resulting in loss of production houses. People spent millions and worked hard to create a good movie and should be rewarded back with good monetary benefits.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, with the current lifestyle, people generally gets very less quality time to spend with their loved ones and when planned it should be spent with full zest. Watching movies over the screen will never give you same experience and entertainment as watching it in cinema.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-01-16 | CamillaAr | 73 | view |
| 2019-04-06 | batajrberk | 39 | view |
- Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these v 67
- Essay topics: Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays.Does this development have more disadvantages than advantages? (78) 78
- Some people say that in all level of education, from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills, do you agree or disagree? 89
- Some people want academic subjects such as history and physics to be taught at secondary school. Others want practical skills such as mechanical and gardening to be taught. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter•introduce yourself•describe your plans for the party•invite your neighbo 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ich can now be seen over mobile phones. Whereas, other group is of the opinion that mov...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... creating cinematic atmosphere at home. The surround sound systems, big screen and lights th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97538461538 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67593969559 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587692307692 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0909175565 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1176470588 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200733021066 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692753020565 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583401418137 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114565961371 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784417597771 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.