As the competition in the present society getting more intense, students graduating from the university are facing with insufficient job vacancies. I personally agree that this phenomenon may have a tremendous impact on unemployed graduates. The several reasons for it could be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, one of the primary possibilities for this consequence is due to the senior workers permanently occupying the working position. To demonstrate, nowadays in many working place such as restaurants, corporation, hospitals, old professionals or employees are unwilling to leave their vocation, insisting not to retire. This scenario not only deprives the social freshman of various employment opportunities, but may also results in significant issue for the future working prospect of modern society.
In addition to the reason above, the redundant number of graduated students is a probability as well. The number of graduates overtakes the demanded figures of the employment. For instance, during the recent years, more and more universities overenroll students into the university. This may overproduce social freshman into the job market. Eventually, these graduates would encounter either unemployed or engage in low-professional-demanded service work.
Last but not least, for some of the students who are underprivileged, they are forced to apply for the admission loan as the escalating tuition fees is unaffordable to them. The unfortunate situation of unemployment is even disastrous for them due to the fact that inadequate income to repay the debit.
As argued above, the condition of jobless has commonly existed in daily lives, and having several adverse effects on the graduates. It is necessary for the universities and the authorities to make radical adjustments in the future.
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- Children over 15 years should be allowed to take their own decision without any interference from Their parents. Do you agree or disagree? 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ervice work. Last but not least, for some of the students who are underprivileged, they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70181818182 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39927070448 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6741372094 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220831291577 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684876640607 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411632329027 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112564320031 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344064186214 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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