Enjoyment or happiness is an important part of any person's life. As people are stressed with their day to day life activities, it is important to take a break to reduce that stress. The level
of stress and tension can be reduced by doing something that provides you pleasure. Some people believe that adolescent or younger people can not enjoy life better than older people, Others
disagree. In my view, unambiguously, Younger people enjoy life better than older people.
The main reason is that younger people do not have any responsibilities rather than just studying. Responsibilities generally impose great stress on people and they are not mentally prepared to handle such stress. This type of stress older people can not handle. They can not focus on their hobbies or refreshment as younger people having fewer responsibilities. For example, I like to play cricket and it gives me happiness. I can play cricket every day as I do not have to go to the job and earn money. This particular example clearly illustrates how I can focus on my hobby.
The second reason is that they have less health-related problems than older people. Health is one of the primary reason for the happiness of a person. If a person is suffering from some mental illness, it is very hard to enjoy life. Some people can not eat some food because of health issues. For example, One of my friend's grandmother has diabetes at the last stage. She can eat any of the sweet. Despit sweet is one of the favorite food of her. The disease can be diagonased but it can not provide comeplete recovery. If you repair bicycle once definitely it will not provide that much efficiency as compared to new without repairing.
Thirdly, They cannot achieve more knowledge of the world by studying. they can not study like students in classrooms. Even though there are classes available for such type of students, there grasping power is less compared to a younger adolescent child. They take more time to learn things that can be learned in even shorter time by young age people. for example, My mother has learned 3 months about the android phone in order to acquaint with its feature. Whereas it takes only 2 days for me to explore it.
In sum, There are various reasons for this point of view. Not only older people have health related issues but also they have more responsibilities. This will create stress and burden on them. though they are settled with family they can not spend money recklessly. Younger people have also some problems but they can overcome it. Like health-related issue, they can tackle as their body can heal fast. Generally, Younger people enjoy life more than oldies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: They
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Suggestion: For
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Suggestion: Though
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Message: “though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.825708061 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62143564735 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.772808511 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.1470588235 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.20588235294 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27431067639 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739520941067 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949104889128 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177649599143 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100233594359 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.