Neighbors are the most important people in anyone's life, As we spend most of the time near to them. Their behavior will definitely reflect in yours also. There are many things in your life which are affected by them. so it is must, to get good neighbors. In my view, they should possess some qualities like friendliness, helpful and clean.
First, They should maintain cleanness around the colony. Maintaining cleanliness eventually maintain a clean society. It improves the health of the people. Dirty homes are home for some illness. Maintaining clean society is important for the health of the people. For example, One of my freind, Sandeep shah who is living next to my society. His neighbors do not believe in maintaining the cleanliness around their homes. Some years back my freind became ill because of that dirtyness. I went to meet hime and see that there is garbage here and there around his neighbor's house. After in 2 days, I became ill. The doctor told me that it is because of my visit to my friend's house. This example clearly illustrates that they should maintain the cleanness around the home
if they want to be healthy.
Second, They must be freindly and helpful. The nearest persons in anyone's life are neighbors. If anything happens or any problem is there, they can reach us immidiately. Their helpful nature can be useful to us. For instance, When I was 13 my father has a heart attack at 2 am. My mother was scared and she asks for the help. Our neighbors are such good and helpful persons. They immediately called the ambulance and take my father to the hospital. They also came with us. On those days, I have exams. So their friendly nature comes handy. They advise me as a friend to take exams and says that do not worry they will be there for the whole day. Thus, This type of nature is very crucial when a person needs help urgently.
In sum, Neighbours are very important persons in anyone's life. They are not only contributing to building the environment around us but they also affect your nature. If you live around people who believe in friendliness and cleanness than you will also be of that type. However, If persons around you always talking about violence than you will also become violent. There is the number of qualities neighbors should have but this cleanliness and friendliness are two qualities that every neighbor should possess.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, talking about, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75421686747 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48153465129 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50843373494 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.782978198 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.3714285714 100.406767564 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8571428571 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.88571428571 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164050589486 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037680309881 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492141987537 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927597486204 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693389782945 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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