Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
People live in different places, as some of us are residents of a countryside and others occupy apartments in large cities. Anyway, all of us have at least one neighbor. Therefore, it is important to define essential characteristics of great neighbors. In my view, good neighbors have to be both respectful and supportive. There are a few reasons why I hold this opinion.
First of all, respectful neighbors make our lives less stressful. Nowadays, people are extremely busy at their workplaces, furthermore, a lot of us have families to take care about. We make a lot of efforts to be professional employees in order to keep our jobs, and we try our best to be wonderful spouses and parents. All these efforts take an enormous amount of energy to accomplish them, so when we come home, we want to chill out in a quiet environment. In this case, it is important to have respectful neighbors, who are not very noisy because they understand that people who live around them need some rest. For instance, when I lived in an apartment in Moscow and had a physically hard job, I had a neighbor who always played loud music even late at night, which did not let me relax after overwhelming days. Moreover, it made me even more stressed out and exhausted. That is why having a neighbor who cares about people around him is pivotal for me.
Secondly, supportive neighbors can help us when we need it in emergency moments. Sometimes, when people face unexpected situations, the only ones who can assist them instantly are those who live nearby. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a student, I spent a summer in my pregnant sister`s house. When at one night, she started delivering a baby, her husband was out of a town, and at that moment, I did not have a drivers license, so I could not transport her to a hospital. Therefore, I ran to my sister`s neighbor to ask him to take the young suffering woman to a hospital, and this kind gentleman helped us without a hesitation. As a result, my sister delivered a baby in a medical facility, and her labors were assisted by professionals. In this way, neighbors who are able to support us in an emergency situation are the ones who I would like to live next to.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the hallmarks of an excellent neighbor are respectfulness and supportiveness. This is because it allows us to feel comfortable in our homes and aids us in urgent circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and aids us in urgent circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6766743649 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97721794262 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540415704388 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2351863271 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0434782609 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8260869565 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222140104157 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683249423575 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539755890943 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143524791791 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294895867548 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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