Everyone in this world want to achieve victory in their life.Some people believe that hard work is the major key to get success in their life while others wonder that luck is important. In my point of view, I think hard work is the only path to get success in life because nothing will take right path without proper plan and if someone have talent he/she will loose it because of proudness.
First of all, Plan and hard work is needed most to achieve success in their life. some people argue that success comes with chance If we work with a good plan and dedication surely we can attain success. practice makes the man perfect as well as it helps to gain the success as well .i believe that success comes in those hands which have planning with the will to work hard. For instance,One of my friend Daniel makes different plans before studying now he have topped the board exam of the grade 12 with 91 percentages.So, anyone who loves to make plans before doing something will surely get success in respective work.
In the other hand, Being proud after having talent is seen in many individuals which will demolish the talent of the people.Talented people doesn't want to work hard because of their own overconfidence toward their talent but the guy who loves to work hard will surely win them. In addition to this, due to blind faith they say that success comes by luck, practise do not have any importance.One who work hard respect the work of others. for example,according to the news article published in 'The Himalayan Times' in 2017 it was found that more than 50% of students who work hard get job in many biggest companies.Thus,hard work is the vital key for the success.
In the nutshell,there are many people who have achieve success in their life and the reason is only hard work and who have planned well before working with determination .'Hard work is key to success' one should go for it rather than waiting for luck.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61739130435 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54005343558 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504347826087 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9637817952 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.3 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10892677978 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630660785317 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373189564306 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806037296732 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010384363592 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.