It is not necessary for people to travel and learn about the culture of the other. We can learn the other culture from books, films and Internet. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Due to the development of science and technology, we now can stay in our homes and use books, films or internet to learn about different culture. I frown when I hear people suggest that traveling outside to learn about the other culture is unnecessary for the reason that watching movies or browsing websites totally has the same effects. However, their view is short-sighted, flawed and even absurd. The only way to truly experience the other culture, in my opinion, is just having a trip.
First of all, traveling can let tourists contact a new culture in person, which can not be completed by internet technologies. The real feeling is absolutely different from visual inputs, especially for the communication with local people and the taste of local food. At the same time, it is impossible to show every details of local culture by words and videos. Only with traveling can let individuals have a chance to deeply understand the other culture.
Furthermore, in addition to learning about a new culture, traveling has other benefits. Traveling can beneficial for people’s physical health because of walking and breathing fresh air. Staring at the screen or reading books for a long time will do great harm to their eyes. In fact, traveling is also a necessary way for most citizens to release their pressure.
We have to admit that traveling will cost plenty of money. It seems that learning about the other culture via books or films is cheaper than traveling. However, if a person desires to totally understand one culture, the cost of books or films could be even more than that of having a trip. Moreover, the cost of traveling will not be so much if you can book discounted tickets and hotels.
To sum up, it is sagacious to support the statement that the traveling is necessary since it not only can let people experience the other culture in person to deeply understand it, but also is good for both physical and psychological health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9009009009 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7119960343 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510510510511 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3406941578 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440148945886 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128078439653 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815236782812 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234801914061 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489114492843 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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