It is true that privately-operated health services have become more and more popular besides public ones. In my opinion, despite some obvious disadvantages of private medical treatments, I would argue that these are outweighed by their advantages.
On the one hand, there are two major drawbacks when one chooses private health care services. Firstly, they are operated by profit-making organizers and this would lead to the case that money would be the first priority instead of people’s health. Unless governments put a restriction on service price, some private medical institutions will set high fee for prescription charges, which discriminates against those with lower income. Furthermore, due to being unrestricted by governments, private hospitals might employ less qualified medical practitioners. Consequently, the provided services do not come up with patients’ expectation and in some cases, this will put someone’s life in danger.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits of private health care services are more significant. The first reason is that patients do not have to wait for a long time to take the treatments they want. In public medical institutions, in contrast, there is oftentimes a long waiting list and therefore it is very time-consuming for patients who need immediate treatments or those coming for an irregular check-up. Another reason is that private medical institutions need money to operate constantly, therefore, they must provide the best services as possible to attract customers. Patients would be benefited from this since these institutions spend a large amount of money to employ highly qualified doctors and buy modern medical devices to meet their service user’s needs.
In conclusion, although private health care services expose some drawbacks, it seems to me that their advantages outweigh those disadvantages
- Some people say it is OK to use animals for our benefit others say it is not good to exploit them Discuss both points of view and give your opinion 86
- Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6048951049 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1884220257 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1521738754 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.307692308 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281789009846 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105651638875 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060932524836 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195909446062 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466648508699 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.