Some people feel that we are wasting our money in the Space Race. We need to spend money on earth. Do you agree or disagree with this?”
It is important to consider how nations should spend their funds. Few individuals believe that countries are squandering their money on the Outer Space Race, and this funding must be used to develop our planet. This essay agrees with the above-stated belief and will put forward its arguments in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, spending money to explore the outer space has no real-life benefits. For instance, Even if any country somehow manages to reach on planet Mars in the year 2020, the state would never be able to colonize humans there as the environment of the planet is not suitable for human existence. So what is the benefit of being involved in this race where even a winner would never be able to obtain any kind of benefit? Thus, countries should stop investing cash in space exploration programs.
Our own planet, on the other hand, is facing lot perilous issues itself. Problems like global warming and depletion of the ozone layer are much more important than exploring life on other planets. Governments of all nations should invest financial resources on these global issues or otherwise the future of our abode in at risk. Countries should spend money on the development of cleaner fuels and techniques to harness the solar energy to curb these problems rather than competing with one another just to receive temporary fame.
To conclude, Nations should put earth’s issues on higher priority instead of indulging themselves in the space exploration competition. Once, our planet itself has a secure future then these programs can be considered viable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s in the space exploration competition. Once, our planet itself has a secure future ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, thus, for instance, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12643678161 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58615297233 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4709739005 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174046992574 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630478922264 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555494702457 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109058351709 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440389391906 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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