In the current century, gaps among nations are decreasing annually, as individuals are exposed to similar services and products and adopt similar habits. There are both the benefits and drawbacks of this trend of lifestyle. However, in my opinion, there are certainly more merits of globalization than demerits. My inclination towards this opinion will be explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, the foremost advantage of having similar life patterns is that it generates awareness among the public about different cultures and nations. Due to this, the biases among the nations are reduced and people empathize each other's feelings. Another benefit is that customers get to choose the products from a wide range of international brands. For instance, the products of multi-national companies such as Star Bucks, Nike, Dominoes were only heard in many countries which are now available in each and every showroom of a nation.
The secondary merit of having an equal style of living is that there are no cultural gaps between various nations. With the advent of globalization, individuals in developing nations migrate on a large scale to the developed nations for better future prospects. As a similar form of lifestyle is practiced everywhere, people are able to adjust easily in any country. In addition to this, better business relations are developed between nations which improve their political and economic conditions. Furthermore, as huge enterprises are set in a nation, the problem of unemployment is also resolved with denizens being recruited in masses as staff members in these companies.
On the other hand, there are also some demerits of increase in globalization. The biggest disadvantage is that citizens of a nation forget their cultural and traditional values as they adopt a western lifestyle. With an increase in demand for branded foreign items, local businesses suffer from huge losses as they are less preferred by the native consumers. Additionally, as people eat more fast-foods and other unhealthy edibles, they face various health issues like obesity, cholesterol and health problems.
Thus, in order to draw a conclusion, it can be said that following similar living patterns is a beneficial trend due to the numerous reasons stated above, and hence must be adopted by all the countries of the world. Nonetheless, care must be taken so the nation's culture is not damaged in this process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31266149871 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87936238093 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576227390181 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7662143101 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.210526316 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107519726329 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311256889432 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245988360148 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566930346598 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247354724181 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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