In many countries, government are spending a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money.
In the modern age, higher cost is paid by government to gain the internet service and obviously it is a favourable. Presenting my view I would intend to explore my view in following paragraphs.
One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that internet is a basic need of people in every field. There are probably a number of factors including to internet service is improved by the government. The chief cause might be that banking system is operated by the internet and some banking sites provide the knowledge about day to day variation in the currency. As well as subsequent factor could be that people who have unemployed do the online jobs in the internet and earn the higher wages. For instance, the recent survey findings have clearly indicated the 70 percent railway or airways ticked booking by online.
However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of large amount of money are spend in improving internet access. Of course there are couple of shortcomings. The most unfeavourable quality might be that students spend own gold time to play the online games in the cafe. Obviously there are lot of danger with regard to this issue the rays of internet put the bad Impacts on the heart of human being. Essentially, one fundamental concern is that some birds are being died by the transformation of rays. Such as, according to WHO 40 percent sparrow has been died by the impact of rays in India.
To conclusion, although there are good reasons government spending higher wages to improve the internet system. But in opinion government should a limited money on internet this must be because of there are number of drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...he internet service and obviously it is a favourable. Presenting my view I would intend to e...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
...booking by online. However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of large amou...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...o mitigate of large amount of money are spend in improving internet access. Of course...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
...ormation of rays. Such as, according to WHO 40 percent sparrow has been died by the...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'limited money'.
Suggestion: limited money
...ystem. But in opinion government should a limited money on internet this must be because of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for instance, of course, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89122807018 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64319308469 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7264239429 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.9333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217004167248 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068241854552 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828770797644 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133880849345 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076030730359 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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