I, personaly, strongly agree that the extended family is becoming less common than it was in the past. After the industrial revolution, human beings lifestyle have changed significantly and alter many aspects of our life as well our family structures. Moreover, nowadays, people have a different attitude, interests, desires and so forth. And the last but not least, relationship in general have declined among folks, so it definetely effects our relation in familys too.
First, After the so-called industrial revolution people migrated from rural areas to urban zone. They used to live by agriculture and also they had a small comunities. They faced with abundant difficulties, and they could not conqure hardships unless they supported each other. Thus, we get to the point how much extended family was vital for ancient people to survive. But, by migration to cities, people became more independent and they no more required to keep close relationship with others as well as their family. That is why I think the humans progress have changed shape of our family.
Second of all, today, people have a variety of options to make their future. For example, a group of people may want to follow professional athles, whereas others are interested to attent university and get a degree. Besides, wetend to make relation with people who have the same desires. Hence, once search for a person with specific quality. It is obvious that having more in common get a higher priority than try to communicate with your relatives, particularly when they do not underestand you!
Ultimately, I assume that people appreciate loneness in comparison to the past. For example, I prefer to stay at home and study my favorite book rather than interact with my cousines. It does no mean that I am selfish. I realize that many of my friends have the same feeling as mine.
For all the reasons that I have stated, I presume, No only have extended family decayed, but also people even have no desire to start friendship! our society has been changing rapidly and people comprehend life diffrently. Therefore, the old kinds of realationship certainly have no more practical results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
... After the industrial revolution, human beings lifestyle have changed significantly an...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...ven have no desire to start friendship! our society has been changing rapidly and p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, i think, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05027932961 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72061303325 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58938547486 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5805298509 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124296436498 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039305868647 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569931399476 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691342706525 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280071035482 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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