Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten.
Globalization applies majorly to corporate sector more than retail sector. With emerging economy, we can consider benefits of it as helping to country growth in terms of economy,tourism, trade, wealth. We should also consider its limitations which may lead to pollution, deforestation and cross culture malpractices, improper labor practices.
Firstly, considering the positive side, globalization is certainly required for developing countries. Import grades can be reduced when there is mutual agreement with both countries. More International Giants like Amazon would invest their money in country. In addition, the setup of new branches in several countries would enable employment of local resources, access to global products at ease and less cost. Moreover, majority of people would be interested in buying products which are accepted internationally and are quality certified. Also, the technology has improved that people can book their products in Mobile apps or just call Echo devices and make an order. With Amazon prime access, delivery of products can also be made faster.
On contrast, considering the negative side, globalization helps richer people grow in wealth and poorer people to suffer. This would certainly help corporate who need to expand their business across countries. But, it would leave local entrepreneurs or small shops getting critically affected by their growing business for years. People would often prefer Mobile app which is easier to book, rather to buy from local shops and buy products waiting in queues. On the other way, returning a product to local shop would be much easier and we can negotiate and get good quality product as we expect in local shop. this is not possible for Internationally established online markets. as the product would pass quality tests but would not be as per our expectation and our culture needs.
Most of products brought using globalization has been developed based on country it has been manufactured. They might not be manufactured keeping in mind of country road pitfalls, frequent digging of roads, traffic hazards, and other country related issues. Most importantly, cross culture issues would be high and make ethical problems in country. Also, Pollution levels would peak to major level, if new companies are setup. Most of their chemicals would be let out to lakes. Labor would be expected to work in global timings.
In conclusion, there are benefits like, increased trades, communication and corporate profits. we need to favor the long living culture also to be followed. It would help in one way by priceless gift to corporate. It would make local shops to suffer in establishing their market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 7.85571142285 318% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36643026005 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84813566705 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569739952719 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8503875632 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0740740741 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81481481481 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117238289433 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356461135202 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352603495724 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671212290101 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138252597066 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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