The extended family (such as grandparents, cousins, aunt, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.

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The extended family (such as grandparents, cousins, aunt, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.

Extended family, who shares the same blood relationships with us, is linked to us since ancient times to some extent. With or without our full awareness, when in need, we tend to turn to them for help. Some people claim that extended families are no longer essential as we live separately currently. I, nevertheless, disagree with this contention that it is just as important as it was in the past

First and foremost, extended family can get together and share happy moments. With spending time together, such as picnic, hiking and swimming, the joyfulness can bind us together. No one will dis...

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