If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

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...place where there are a lot of things i dont admire that.The place where i currently...
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... are a lot of things i dont admire that.The place where i currently live in isnt as...
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...hat.The place where i currently live in isnt as same as the city and many people are...
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...le are suffering and their life quality havent improved due to the lack of education.I...
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...t improved due to the lack of education.If i am in the situation where i may be ab...
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...t improved due to the lack of education.If i am in the situation where i may be ab...
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...mproved due to the lack of education.If i am in the situation where i may be able...
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...ducation.If i am in the situation where i may be able to change one thing.Educati...
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Suggestion: Education
...where i may be able to change one thing.Education is the one i must make a difference in ...
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...o change one thing.Education is the one i must make a difference in my community....
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Suggestion: , First
...erence in my community. To begin with,First of all,I currently live in a place wher...
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...community. To begin with,First of all,I currently live in a place where many pe...
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Suggestion: , Many
...tious. Though there is only one hospital,Many people dont go to the hospital because ...
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... there is only one hospital,Many people dont go to the hospital because of superstit...
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Suggestion: There
...tal because of superstition and poverty.There are some people who are rich even cant ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...There are some people who are rich even cant go to the hospital and they will call P...
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... is well- experienced if they get sick.There is still violence and discrimination in...
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Suggestion: They
...nd discrimination increasing day by day.They havent gotten education.As a result,the...
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...scrimination increasing day by day.They havent gotten education.As a result,they do th...
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...day by day.They havent gotten education.As a result,they do the stupid things whic...
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...They havent gotten education.As a result,they do the stupid things which makes it m...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
... more difficult to develop our hometown.Furthermore,Many people cant go to school or colleg...
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Suggestion: , Many
...cult to develop our hometown.Furthermore,Many people cant go to school or college bec...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...op our hometown.Furthermore,Many people cant go to school or college because there a...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nnual costs are very expensive and they cant able to pay for education.so that i wou...
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... cant able to pay for education.so that i would like to open a school and a col...
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... quality education for free. Secondly,if A good school and college are being ope...
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...good school and college are being opened,many people can change their lifestyle and w...
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Suggestion: I
...ld be able to learn something important.I would to talk this from my experiences...
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...would to talk this from my experiences.Two years ago,The local election happened.M...
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... this from my experiences.Two years ago,The local election happened.Many people did...
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...o years ago,The local election happened.Many people didnt know what the election mea...
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...The local election happened.Many people didnt know what the election meant and why it...
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Suggestion: When
...meant and why it was important for them.When there was a election, many candidates ...
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...t was important for them.When there was a election, many candidates had given mo...
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...o many people in order to vote for them.Many people voted for the one who gave a lar...
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...s and chose bad candidates and till now,our hometown hasnt improved and are the sam...
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...ad candidates and till now,our hometown hasnt improved and are the same as usual.so t...
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Suggestion: If
...rior to opening industry, making roads.If many people have got education and they...
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...and what is wrong or right and can judge,we can develop our hometown and make a l...
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...an judge,we can develop our hometown and make a lot of difference in our hometown...
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Suggestion: With
... of difference in our hometown together.With education,they may be able to get jobs ...
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Suggestion: , they
... in our hometown together.With education,they may be able to get jobs and fulfill the...
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...l their familys wishes. In conclusion,with the development of education,they may b...
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...lusion,with the development of education,they may be able to change their lifestyle a...
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...ay they used to behave and they may help develop our hometown so that our priorit...
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...ometown so that our priority is to open much schools and colleges as possible as we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89906103286 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04188128048 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467136150235 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.1344086022 353% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 278.977697237 48.9658058833 570% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 347.833333333 100.406767564 346% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 20.6045352989 345% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.1666666667 5.45110844103 407% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.53405017921 309% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 47.0 5.5376344086 849% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836669657801 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444203438667 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311988541675 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334446966382 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243949566865 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 11.7677419355 315% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.59 58.1214874552 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 10.1575268817 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.0537634409 302% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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