You have lost your student identification card. You need this card to get discounts on transport and at the cinema, and to use the college library. You also need it as proof of identify to withdraw money from the bank.
Write a letter to the director of the student services, in your letter: introduce yourself and explain why you are writing, explain your situation and why you need a replacement ID card, request a new card as soon as possible
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Olga Choklia. Unfortunately, I am writing you to inform about my lost student ID card. I am a student of the management course MC3553. Two days ago I realized that I had lost my ID card. Although I have looked everywhere for it and asked in the main office. I have not been able to find it yet. I think I have lost it when I was riding my bicycle to class.
As you can imagine my ID card is necessary for my studies. Unfortunately, I cannot get discounts on public transport. Actually, my accommodation is far from the university and this means it is difficult for me to pay full fane on the busses. Neither can I use the college facilities to borrow books from the library.
I would appreciate if you can understand my difficulty and the urgency that I have at the moment.
Therefore could you please arrange for a replacement of my ID card? I will be very careful in the future with my ID card. I realize that it can take several days to prepare another one but without it I cannot study or travel. If you need any additional information, I will be happy to provide it.
I appreciate your time and consideration in my request.
Yours faithfully,
Olga Choklia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...the urgency that I have at the moment. Therefore could you please arrange for a replacem...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43497757848 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81443637384 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587443946188 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6712958236 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.9444444444 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3888888889 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255059593992 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786203458769 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563158013696 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134389213204 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530347055077 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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