The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Kawin on Thu, 11/22/2018 - 11:50

The provided pie charts compare the domestic, agricultural, and industrial water consumptions in six major parts of the world. Overall, Central Asia accounted for the highest percentage in agricultural use. Whereas Europe showed for the lowest percentage in industrial use. While, the least percentage of water is used for the domestic needs.

To begin with, a major portion of water consumption could be observed in the agricultural sector, and Central Asia comprise the highest proportion at 88%, following by Africa, South East Asia, and South America which are 84%, 81% and 71% respectively. However, agricultural use just under two fifths in North America, but the lowest percentage at 32% comprised by Europe.

Turning to the used water for industrial sector, Europe is the most popular percentage which is 53%. Conversely, Central Asia demonstrated the smallest proportion just only 5%. Also, just around one in ten percentage are in the South America, Africa and South East Asia. Finally, the domestic used is not popular type. Nevertheless, the highest percentage just under one fifth in South America. Whilst, Central Asia, and South East Asia are the lowest percentages at 7%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, however, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36170212766 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83228573111 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526595744681 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.937597989 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165399790692 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833574159934 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635360789943 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136607420611 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986077593799 0.0819641961636 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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