Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many people believe that computers are the most indispensable invention for centuries , whereas others argue that this is a robot revolution which is here now and growing. I strongly agree the former. The following essay will support my opinion with additional information.
Computers actually change human's life significantly. Thanks to computers, many modern technologies can be programmed for consumers' demands and robots are not an exception. One of example of this is how robots can move, do actions or even speak and they can replace people in variety of household chores such as : doing washing - up, sweeping the floor, cleaning the house, so on... In the factory, we can see robots help workers a lot in dangerous jobs and difficult stages as well. Thus computers have play a really important role in our life.Not only computers programmed robots , but did computers also programmed other technologies to improve our life. If there is not computers and internet, we will not have a fulfilling life nowadays. It seems everything technologies almost related to computers.
Another remarkable benefit of the computer is that it is the main resource of the knowledge of human. On the internet, we search all information which we need , approach to the world through computer screen and update the latest news all over the world. People can use computers for study, works, relaxation and many more things. Computers have contributed so much in developing the world.
In conclusion , there is no doubt that computers are the most important invention in recent decades. Technologies are related to computers to gain the achievements. Therefore, computers is the origin of later inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93717696209 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0402701551 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8235294118 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183234595844 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582938626357 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462804561994 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124855455339 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469382703217 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.