Mr. Smith,
I live in your private accommodation in Brighton near English language school. I am writing to you about my friends and my problem because we often have not hot water.
We told to Mr. Rajee your workman several times to solve the issue, however, he tries to solve the problem but afterwhile heating water collapse again in that heating water is really old and it should replace with a new heating machine. Moreover, the machine has a problem and use much water in the area and makes the area really cleanliness. In addition, that machine uses many electricity owing to new technology new machines decrease usage of electricity in new years.
I think you can buy a small heating pot for each room because it is really convenient for a resident to have hot water to make tea or coffee. it is notable using small heating pot lowered energy cost and have more benefits for your accommodation in long-term and can appeal more residence to you in future.
Jack Brown,
Yours sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Mr. Smith, I live in your private accommodation in ...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun electricity seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much electricity', 'a good deal of electricity'.
Suggestion: much electricity; a good deal of electricity
...nliness. In addition, that machine uses many electricity owing to new technology new machines de...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'watered'.
Suggestion: watered
...y convenient for a resident to have hot water to make tea or coffee. it is notable us...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...o have hot water to make tea or coffee. it is notable using small heating pot lowe...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...rm and can appeal more residence to you in future. Jack Brown, Yours sincerely
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...idence to you in future. Jack Brown, Yours sincerely
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uture. Jack Brown, Yours sincerely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, really, so, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7816091954 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54009985624 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1007880856 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275430167942 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111729905631 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795729613131 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200037265696 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813023680728 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.