Dated: 29 July, 2017
Respected Sir,
Subject line: Supermarket accident and demanding for implementation of preventive measures.
Gritting Sir, I hope find you well. I am a banker who work in a bank which is located on near this supermarket. In fact, I do all of my shopping from your store and I am always satisfied with your products because of being in a good quality and having reasonable price. The only issue that really not only bothers me but others is about being so crowded and lack of adequate space that contributed to a small accident by one of the customers which left catastrophic pain in my knee cap. So, I would be thankful if you could get my recommendation related to providing more space among racks in order to hinder these kinds of accidents.
I look forward hearing from you. Thank you in advance for your immediate attention to this matter.
Yours faithfully,
FATEMEH BAGHERI.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2017'.
Suggestion: July 2017
Dated: 29 July, 2017 Respected Sir, Subject line: Supermar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84076433121 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79456012836 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.726114649682 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8398968265 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174181695968 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732516484581 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318071823595 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900591965582 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578732476675 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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