Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to express my delight with the excellent services. my family and I experienced the best party which was held in your hotel 2 weeks ago.
As a matter of fact every body was extremely satisfied with everything in the party including the food which was so suitable for our guests who were elderly. In addition, playing some classic musics were incredibly nostalgic and surly everybody enjoyed a lot.
Not only your facilities were splendid but also your staff members were highly hospitable and helpful especially Mr Smith who did an an especial kind to us. When my grandfather was feeling not well who was the one that went to drugstore and provided some drugs for him.
Your staffs and you deserve the best and in order to express my heartfelt thanks, I would like to invite you and your staff over to dinner in our garden, where there will be much happiness and joy so you guys will be paid the respect and appreciation you deserve for your perfect organization of my dear garndfather's birthday party.
Yours sincerely,
F. BAGHERI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to you to express my deligh...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...my delight with the excellent services. my family and I experienced the best party...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: an
...and helpful especially Mr Smith who did an an especial kind to us. When my grandfathe...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: an; an
...and helpful especially Mr Smith who did an an especial kind to us. When my grandfathe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, in addition, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79144385027 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54836260433 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641711229947 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.0682868425 44.8134815571 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215056030109 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906948715554 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798818985617 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126705602077 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447235341755 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.