Some people believe that teachers have an important role to play in the educational success, while others think that it is the students attitude that matters. Discuss both views and share your opinion.
Education is corner stone of individual future and community development. There are some people who assert that tutors have more significant contribution for the educational success, whereas some others holds a dissenting opinion and argue that behavior of pupils have more impact. I opine that if both teachers and student, perform in cooperative manner than only successful outcomes can be achieved.
On the one hand, there are people who debate that teachers have major role in the educational success holds valid points to argue. The predominate reason is learning and experience. Teachers are well educated in their subjects and have knowledge of the stream. Moreover, in the teachers training courses that are well trained to guide the students and ways to develop the positive mindset of the pupils.For instance, in India recruitment process for teachers has been made strict, it is mandatory for all the applicants to have additional degree of bachelors of education. Undoubtedly, this is because they are the one who are building the future of the country. Therefore, if tutors perform their duty well it will be helpful to have the more positive outcome from the education for the students.
On the other hand, considering the views of the people who believe that pupils attitude is the factor that make the major difference. There are many students who are more intelligent then other it is because of their focus on education. Some students are extremely notorious, and do not pay the attention on what teachers are saying and ultimately they are unable to ripe the benefits from the education provided to them. It becomes difficult for tutors to handle this types of students, what can really helpful in developing the proper behavior among pupils is the discipline and manners taught by their parents, because family is the first school for the child. If the basic habits of the child is not controlled, no tutor can teach them anything. Thus, providing proper environment to child right from birth helps in developing many personality attributes, which is useful when they start schooling and then definitely gain from the lessons taught by teachers.
In conclusion, teachers responsibility and students attitude both are equally importance for the educational success of the country. If teachers perform their duty well and try to teach the child in best possible way; and parents must also take the responsibility of developing positive behavior in their children and teach them how to treat the people well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18292682927 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73072826532 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3160356827 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1176470588 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248506840379 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875753991813 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831432314852 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167613430557 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526646401243 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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