Nowadays, culture is more or less same around the world compared to in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?
With the development of technology, whole world is becoming a small village, as every country is having the same brand of clothing, food types and access to information. Unequivocally, almost all the countries of the world are becoming the same. I opine that this trend will have adverse effects in the long run and people must try to maintain their own unique culture.
To begin with, every country is unique because of its own inherit ant tradition, costumes and ancient civilization. As, these days many brands of clothing, shoes and many more things, are capturing the international market. Pattern of dressing is becoming the same everywhere. To cite an example, Nike, Adidas and Levis are having its outlets in almost all the major cities of the world. Choice of music is also becoming common. Compared to past when every area was famous for its distinct taste for music, at present all are listening to popular pop music. Diversity is the unique thing, which all enjoys and proudly own, but this is what we are losing nowadays. Therefore, this advancement is leading us to similar places with no adventure to explore which is the adverse development.
Moreover, this change is not beneficial from economic point of view as well. If whole world will be similar nobody will want to travel to different places and tourism industry will be adversely effected. People like to visit different place in order to experience something new which is different from their native place. Moreover, many foody people often travel to enjoy different types of cuisines, but nowadays all the variety of dishes of different countries are served everywhere. For instance, in India we have Chinese, Italian, Thai and many more restaurants where anybody can enjoy international food in their home country. Hence, this clearly demonstrates that tourism will be negatively effected because of this change.
In conclusion, as world is growing and with new innovation's information is freely flowing, because of which world is becoming similar. However, with this similarity we are forgetting our own unique culture and nothing left to explore in this world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15428571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67170204865 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551428571429 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4286559779 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9473684211 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190386876159 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561963342153 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045603433454 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119114805956 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290747354398 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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