Dear Mr. Patel,
This is Jessica from 10th block, north garden layout. Through this letter, I request you to shift me to 20th block or plan for action on second floor tenants.
Most importantly, the huge noise from the party held yesterday, disturbed my peace, tranquility hence I was unable to sleep. So, it affected my concentration at work today. Further, all members in party are sloshed and we are not able to convince them to reduce noise. Consequently, most apartment people were fully awake whole night.
Further, I request you to allocate 20th block vacant flat, or initiate constructive discussion with second floor tenants, so that issue resolved completely. Additionally, most apartment tenants have children and they find difficult to start to school next day.
Moreover, we are looking forward for your assistance in making peace in the blocks. Finally, we suffer with this issue for the past few months.
Your Swift action is highly appreciated.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
Jessica.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, hence, if, look, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35185185185 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68873045368 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.740740740741 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7165472069 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0299941808368 0.216113520407 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0133047949115 0.0766984524023 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196070619108 0.0603063233224 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0182011986966 0.12726935374 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181008977176 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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